I recently had an installation in the Vault Space at Umbrella Studio. It consisted of four verses of prose about chronic pain. The responses I got for ‘just words’ were fascinating. One person told me it made them cry. Others said they didn’t like it, the piece was too negative. Others loved it. The Vault Space is an actual safe that is no longer in use. My audience were in the vault – with the door open – when they read these words:
Imagine you are in a vault
You can’t get out
No-one will find you
And there is not enough air
That vault is your mind
You are in pain
That pain has locked
You in your body
You cannot free yourself
You are locked
In with your pain
Imagine you are in a vault
Your mind is locked
In with your pain
There is no air
Only pain
Now walk outside
Look up at the sky
and breathe.
Lynn, this is terrific and must have been a visceral experience being in the vault. And, the relief of escape! BTW I hope you told the person who said it was too negative that pain is too negative. Love your work…
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Thanks Rosa.
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